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Tuesday, 23 June 2015

My Narrative - Recording

I stumbled into the bathroom and stared in horror at my reflection in the mirror.  I usually looked dreadful first thing in the morning, but today it was worse than usual.  Somehow, during the night, I had transformed into a werewolf. Staring at the amazement of my huge hairy hands, I took a quick glimpse at my body but soon stopped at my tail.  ‘Come on! How am I supposed to hide this… thingy!?” I thought to myself. I wasn’t worried about my tail that much, the thing I worried about was my big, hairy body!  Seriously, my big hairy ears might not be enough, but a big hairy EVERYTHING to go with it? Now that, it’s just the whole definition of taking it way too far.


As I stepped outside,  I instantly noticed something was wrong! It was like a crazy coincidence! My body and now this? Now, I know you are wondering what is happening. Let me rephrase this... Suddenly, I was welcomed by a cold, dark and a mysterious place. It was strange, really, because it was exactly like the dream I had last night. The whole place was dark. Dead plants were lying around, evil, red eyes stared from here to there. Just like I said… exactly like the dream! Afraid-y chills ran down my spine as I took a step closer. CrAcK! Before I could finish this sentence I fell int…..




3 comments:

  1. Very nice work Fa'asua I like how you used WOW words, Adjectives and punctuation. It felt like I was really there! Keep going with your wonderful work Fa'asua!

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  2. Nice work sii! I really like how you used lots of adjective and how you wrote the story. The story is amazing. Great job keep it up!

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